Is it gloomy or bright?
Should I believe in a wish
Or not strive for true bliss?
My star is plastic, pointy and hard
Reminding me always to be on guard
No night is soft, the air turns cold
Just like this star that I firmly hold
I suppose my star is to hold things in place
Hold back my belongings and give me some grace
The stars inside it swirl and twirl
Much like me, a confused older girl
If I leave it alone, the stars sit in the bottom
Inaction leads us to be wadded wet cotton
But shaking things up, now that can be pretty
Have you figured out my silly fun bitty?
Try not to be shaken but stirred up a bit
Not a full swallow but please take a sip
Of life and its bliss as well as its pains
Otherwise, really, nothing is gained.
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Thank you!
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Lots to ponder here. Love it!
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Like staring at a sky of stars – so much to take in!
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Oh this is beautiful Pam, such wisdom and depth here, wrapped lovingly in gentle lightness. I particularly loved ‘but shaking things up, now that can be pretty’…I have to trust that, and remember the pretty times when the occasional messy shaking up happens. Hugs, H xxx
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Pretty messy, life can be, right? But messy is much prettier than inaction. I’m pretty sure I prefer messy; if my desk is any indication, it’s the way I roll. 🙂
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Life lessons can be found in the most unlikely of places. Nicely done 🙂
… and I love this very unusual “snow” dome!
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I gave my creative writing class the exercise to find something on their desks at home and write a story about it. This poem is what came from my ‘star’ object on my computer table that I use to get my thoughts unstuck. So, yes, ‘life lessons found in the most unlikely places/things.’ xo
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I think I like it even more now that I know the background story 🙂
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This confused older girl’s mind swirls and twirls sometimes, too, Pam. I love the last stanza. So true. I want to be present for life’s ups and downs. Have a great weekend!
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No bliss without the pain, right? :-0
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Stir it up, Pamela. Be the star.
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Shining a light can be a bit daunting, particularly with all those stars in the sky. But stirring it up? That I can do. 🙂
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Loved this, Pam! ❤
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Thank you much, Jill. Hope your star is shining as you PRESS ON!
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Thanks, Pam!
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Awesome poem Pamela!! Love the pics too! 😀 ❤
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Thanks Courtney. It was fun trying to get the photo with the gold stars stirring in the plastic object. Ah, the fun things we do to be creative, huh? 🙂
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Yep!! 😀
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Keeps us young and fun. ❤
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Food for thought, Pam, and wonderfully written. ❤ ❤
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Thank you, Tess. So funny, one never knows what poetic lines will come from the strangest inspiration, like a plastic star…
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Exactly. Well, you put a smile on MY face.
❤ ❤
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Lovely poem! Happy Friday to you!
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I’m nonplussed by the reaction to my star poem. (yes, an in-joke- others will have to go to your blog site to ‘get’ it. 🙂
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As long as you’re not apoplectic…
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I’m rarely irate, although rude people and misused grammar can enrage me a bit…. :-0
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Lovely Pam! Much to ponder. For some reason I though about cotton candy.
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Welll, maybe that means you should write a poem about cotton candy! You might be surprised what you learn about yourself.
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Beautiful Pam, this old girl has to remember to stir it up a little once in a while. You deserve a shiny little gold star on your forehead for this poem…… Have a great weekend and hugs
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You do lots of stirring in your line of work, Gerlinde! Speaking of which, I’ve printed out the recipe to your Fregolotta – can I add fresh blueberries on top of the marmalade/jam? (Also, I commented on your site, but not sure it ‘took.’)
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Your comment took and thank you. I made a couple of mistakes when I posted the Fregolotta recipe last night. I had made several versions and didn’t post the last one. I added ¼ tsp. of almond extract and ¼ tsp. of salt to the dough. I sprinkled the blueberries over the marmalade . I am sorry about that!
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okay – I’m running out to buy almond extract…and fresh blueberries 🙂
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When I baked it the last time I used frozen blueberries and it was fine. I didn’t defrost the berries. You can bake it before your friend comes, it’s good for a couple of days.
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Your first 2 lines got me singing….”cause I only have eyes for you, dear” – I get transported back to the PHS dances in the gym at the strangest times!
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Those were transformational, bright and starry-eyed times! xo
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The stars were out the night,
When a poem was written ever so bright,
And much to a reader’s delight,
Words of wisdom shone as a beacon of light.
This is about as corny and simple as I could get. Have no idea why I chose to rhyme the ending of each sentence to sound the same. I’m not a poet and I know it.
Your poem is excellent and profound and gives one food for thought.
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But wow, I’m honored that my little poem made you feel poetic! I don’t believe anything is ‘corny’ if it comes from the heart. I lecture exactly that to my creative writing students – never worry about being ‘sappy.’ Sap is the heartline of the tree, the juice of love. xo
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You are so nice. Always able to find something good to say- no matter how terrible. I was just having fun. No intention to be a poet. 🙂
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Reblogged this on Retirement Made Simple and commented:
I believe this is the first time I’ve reposted a poem. From a blog I just discovered today, via David Kanigan.
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I AM HONORED! Thank you for reblogging my star poem. So glad you found me, and I found you. Thanks to David Kanigan.
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Reminded me a little of ‘I Only Have Eyes For You’ which my mother used to sing around the house 🙂
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Yes, the words to that song were in my mind when I began this ditty. Frank Sinatra singing: Are the stars out tonight?
I don’t know if it’s cloudy or bright
‘Cause I only have eyes for you, dear
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One can strive for bliss- or ease into it – without making wishes
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Ah, I so hope you’re right.
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Then go stir things up, my good friend, ’cause you should!
You’ll find me right here stirring coffee. It’s good!
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Stirring it up – what a great image. Sort of like a witch, stirring her cauldron (of hot tea, not coffee, in my case). Laughing wickedly…
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Love the metaphor and the rhyming feels effortless and natural – well done!
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Much thanks, Barbara. I think the rhythm of the words helped me find my message in here…
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Such a whimsical arrangement of words on the surface. But, as always, when you dive beneath the surface, and wade among the space between your words, there is so much more to be gained. Playful and inspiring Pamela, thanks for sharing your insightful gifts with us. It’s arrived on my doorstep at a very opportune time 🙂
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I hope your stars are burning bright, Dave. Actually, I have no doubt they are.
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Stars are special in our lives, we wish upon them, we see stars when we fall in love and there are movie stars, just to name a few. The stars in globes which are in shape of star really make me smile instead of snow. 🙂
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A star globe makes sense, doesn’t it?? Or a star STAR, in this case. Thanks for reading and commenting. And may the stars be with you, always.
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Beautiful!
I love the romance of stars–familiar sparks of light in the night sky, reminders of the universe’s great expanse.
“Not a full swallow but please take a sip
Of life and its bliss as well as its pains … ” Words to ponder.
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Thank you = I pondered a lot while writing this ‘ditty’ I think most of us get the best out of life if we take it in, one sip at a time. Otherwise, everything is too much to swallow! 🙂
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
THIS IS STELLAR…AND A NICE COUNTERPOINT (?) TO WHAT I JUST POSTED. 🙂
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Thank you! Wow. Stellar. You made my day…and night.
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Having just written about the night time, this post is a perfect companion to that. You think so too? 🙂 God job, by the way!
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Yes, I think so too!
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