I consider taking a walk, but then I remember I need my crutches.
Not that I need the crutches. My leg is fine now. The break was clean; the cast inconvenient but a nice attention getter; the crutches cumbersome and ugly.
I would have liked to have thrown the tall rigid walking implements into the trash. Or at least recycled them for some other poor soul to use.
But, sagely, I left my un-needed crutches standing in the foyer, by the front door.
For just this kind of day. . .
. . . an eerie, chilly late October day, gray-skied with an errant orangey leaf blowing in the wind.
The kind of day I usually relish going for a walk.
But as I open the front door, I re-live how I broke my leg. I had been only five minutes from my house, in front of Mr. Barker’s abandoned 100-year–old mansion. The mansion next to the even older cemetery.
Where, seven weeks ago, I heard a scream so horrifying I immediately ran toward the mansion’s front door before thinking of dialing 911.
Now, I grab one of the crutches and leave my house, breathing in the crisp autumn air.
I must get that horrific image out of my mind . . .
. . . the image of what had greeted me at the old mansion’s front door, which caused me to tumble down the granite front steps, breaking my leg.
Now, almost two months since my broken leg incident, I try to act casual as I stride past the cemetery toward the old house. No one else in the neighborhood is out and about. I’d been so lucky on that August afternoon when a neighbor heard my scream of pain and called 911. The paramedics arrived in record time, and yet, when they put me on a stretcher, moaning and claiming I’d seen something unimaginable in the old house, they took it as the ramblings of an injured woman.
Later, after I got x-rayed and casted, I called the police and insisted they check out Mr. Barker’s house.
“That place has been abandoned since old Mr. Barker died in ’08,” Officer Rodney Steer told me, as blunt as ever. Rodney Steer and I dated once. It didn’t go well, and he’s avoided me like the plague ever since. And I’ve avoided him like I would any unmannered beast.
“We thought it was abandoned,” I told Rodney with a hint of impatience. My leg throbbed, my head pounded, and I couldn’t remove the image of what I’d seen at the mansion. “Someone, or something, greeted me when I opened that front door.”
The pause on the other end of the line told me that Officer Rodney Steer thought I was off my rocker.
“And it wasn’t pretty,” I added, trying to sound as menacing as possible in my shaky, just-broke-my-leg voice. “Please, just go there and check it out.”
Officer Steer assured me a week later, when I called to follow-up, that he had visited the house, where the door was locked and boarded up, “as it has been since ’08,” and my imagination had just run away with me and down the stairs that broke my leg.
The memory of his patronizing tone leads me now to walk up those same granite steps. Call me stupid, but this time, I’m prepared. I hold a crutch in one hand to use as a weapon, and my wits to help me prepare for the sight I might see.
Additionally, I aim my cell phone in my other hand, ready to shoot a photo of the thing that might greet me at the door.
Not surprisingly, the mansion’s front door is not boarded up, and when I turn the knob, it’s not locked.
A scream commences from inside the house.
Of course, by now I’ve figured that the sound is not a scream, but a supplication – a plea – to enter and see what thrives within.
I know I shouldn’t. I beg myself to escape the pull that is urging me to take that first step into the threshold.
Just as I do, the gnarled hoary hand of dead Mr. Barker pulls me in the rest of the way. I hit the camera button on my phone, and . . .
. . . this time, no one hears my screams.
OOhhhh – brilliantly spooky Halloween story! It was so warm, light, everyday in the lead up that the end still caught me – even though I was kind of expecting it. Nice one Pam! Love and hugs, Harula xxx
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I get scared of spooky stories myself, Harula, but I have fun with the genre just once a year. BOO!! xoxo
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Reblogged this on Windy Wolves and commented:
One of the real places to visit! ❤ #SpookySeries #Halloween2016
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Many thanks!!! And Happy Halloween.
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🙂 Wish you the same!!!!!!! ❤
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Yikes! A very Edgar Allen Poe style story.
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In my younger years, Edgar was a much revered short story author/poet in my writing mind. I think parts of him still lead me into …. old mansions.
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Didn’t you hear me screaming “don’t go back! Never go back.” *sigh* In horror stories, no one ever listens!
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True, I usually get annoyed at the character in a movie/book who ‘goes back.’ I think there’s some kind of supernatural pull in this house that brings my character back despite her inner wisdom telling her to NOT GO. Gotta watch out for that supernatural stuff swirling around old mansions. 🙂
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… especially around the end of October 😉
We had a couple of old houses on our street when I was young that I was convinced were haunted. Yet, at the same time, I had an inexplicable urge to go in and look around.
Never did though … something about locks on the doors 😉
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Brava, Pam! I loved this! As I read your story, I could hear the theme from the original Halloween movie playing in my head. 🙂 The photographs are beautiful and scary. Happy Halloween!
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Thank you, thank you, Jill! I didn’t know there’s an original Halloween movie..with this title? I usually don’t watch scary movies because I get too ….scared! I even had to hide under the sheets a few times while I wrote this one. 🙂
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LOL! I was referring to the music from the movie Halloween…with Jamie Lee Curtis. Gosh, I think it’s from the early 80’s. Aside from Silence of the Lambs, those are the only scary movies I’ve seen. Like you, I’m a chicken!
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Reblogged this on Smorgasbord – Variety is the spice of life and commented:
I am keeping an eye out for Halloween stories and here is a frightener from Pamela Wight… be prepared… if you have written a story or poem etc for fright night… send me a link…
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Thanks for reblogging my scary tale, Sally. In some ways this seemed tame to me, which I guess is why the ending kind of ‘GOT’ to people. Muhwwwwhaaaahaha.
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Scary enough to keep me from going trick or treating!!!!! hugs
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Awesome!
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BOO! And Happy Halloween. 🙂
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And Happy Halloween to you also… and Welcome to November
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Good Halloween story, Pam.
When I first started reading, I thought you had really broken your leg–of course, then I soon realized it was a story, but what if. . .? 🙂
I could just hear those patronizing voices of the men. I hope somehow she gets out.
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I think that crutch will still come in handy for her, don’t you? I did enjoy writing this story – it just kind of wrote itself – perhaps the ‘supernatural’ helped me. That Officer Steer – URGH.
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A great Halloween story. Why oh why would she go back?? But then that’s what they do in scary stories, don’t they. Well done.
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I think it’s called, “curiosity killed the cat,” and sometimes women who enter a moaning mansion… :-0 Happy Spanish Halloween, Darlene!
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Brilliantly told story, Pam – as evidenced by my desire to steer clear of your neighborhood on Halloween night 😉 Do we have the makings of something for NaNoWriMo, I wonder? Happy Halloween, my friend 🙂
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No NaNoWriMo for me this year, Dave. How about you? Have a terrific Halloween – I’ll be skipping down the darkened neighborhood of my grandkids’ – and ‘steering’ clear of that mansion. 🙂
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I’m actually “skippin” NaNoWriMo this year so that I can focus on finalizing the now edited manuscript that has just been returned to me by my editor. Aiming for a mid-spring release and a bunch to do yet 🙂 Best of luck reaching 50,000 words 😉
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I’m skipping it too. Great news on your writing front!!!
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Scary! But but the sight of glorious New England fall beats even the terror of Halloween!
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The fall HAS been glorious, despite the fact that the meteorologists guessed that this year fall would be brown and unexciting because of the summer drought we experienced. Instead, it was the opposite. Mother Nature again surprises… Happy Halloween!
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You got me. Holy Moly on a cannoli. You GOT me good!
Fan-tab-U-lous story and so believable. 😀 😀 😀
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Well, your praise means a lot, coming from you, a wonderful short storyteller, Tess. I love that I ‘GOT” you. Happy Spooky Halloween!!!
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Noooo! Don’t go inside! Brilliant story, Pam!
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What is it about large homes/mansions that draw us inside, even though we know it’s a bad idea? Well, you and I know they make for great stories, Amy. 🙂 Happy Halloween in your beachy hometown. xo
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How cool! Love the Halloween story.. you do writing good! he he! Have an awesome weekend Pamela! 😀
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I’m so glad you enjoyed my little Halloweeeny tale, Courtney. I’m hoping for you many yummy ‘treats’ – no tricks, tomorrow. xo
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Pam–Ohhhh–you got me–heart pounding, heart wrenching
tale!!! Happy Halloween to you and Mr. Barker….heeheeheeheehee
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How’d you know, Pat? Mr. Barker keeps pulling me into his lair, doesn’t he?? Lots of treats to you tomorrow, my friend!!!
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Hell you tell a good story Pam!
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Well, that just puffed me up like a happy, candy-fed ghost! Thanks much. 🙂
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Wow, Pam, when I started reading I had NO idea this was fiction! I was thinking I probably didn’t know you’d broken your leg and since it’s late October, I thought you were sharing an anecdote! I began thinking you were one of those who believes in ghosts, etc. Of course, by the time I got to the end I realized it was fiction. After all, if you were pulled into the house you wouldn’t be here to write a story! lol Great stuff!
P.S. Thanks for that beautiful card 🙂 Hugs…
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I don’t mean to be tricky. No, I don’t. Really, I don’t. Well, Halloween is for TRICKS or Treats. And I had fun getting into the tricks. Glad I ‘got’ you.
And glad you liked the card. ❤
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You really sucked me in, good job! Thinking of you with love and best wishes.
Jeanette
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And Happy Halloween to you, my sister-friend. Sounds like it will be a boo-tiful night in your neighborhood.
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Rodney Steer never did understand you.
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Never! But what else would you expect from an ill-mannered beast?
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You’re better off without him around.
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For sure!! 🙂
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Great story! Happy Halloween!
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Thanks, Robin. And Boo Boo to YOU!! xo
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Ah, curiosity will do that to a person…. what a great fright of a story!
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Curiosity can kill more than a cat, for sure. I keep hoping that the crutch came in handy, in the end…
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Creeeeeepy! 😉
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Thanks!!! 👻
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Spooky story on a lovely fall day!
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May we have many more of them-lovely fall days, not spooky stories! 👹
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I was going to ask you when you broke your leg and why you didn’t blog about it!! Great story, Pam. You would not have found me returning to that house! Happy Halloween 🙂
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We need to have some characters with no-sense, sometimes, to give the story a frightful turn, yes? 🙂
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Great story to tell in a candle lit room on Halloween night, and have one crutch standing against the wall. BOO!!!! Happy Halloween.
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Oh yes, props help the storyteller for sure! 👀
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Crutch-as-weapon, great take off, Pam.
I’ve learned not to take your tales as fact, still I believe them every time, hook/line/sinker. Happy Hallowe’en to you too!
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You make me smile, Marian. Most times my posts here ARE all true. But truly, I needed a trick for Halloween. Happy Boo Day.
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This sent chills up my spine. Great Halloween story.
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Chills are GOOD! 🙂
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Haha! Yes, they are.
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Happy Halloween Pam, a creepy, scary, suspenseful story. Are you telling your grandchildren scary stories on Halloween?
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My kids have made me promise to tell NO Halloweeny scary stories to their kids. Party poopers…! 🙂
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Reblogged this on ravenhawks' magazine and commented:
Great Story, Happy Halloween
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Many thanks for the reblog – honored to be a part of your Ravenhawks magazine.
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Must admit…I was spooked!!! Good writing, Pam and a Happy Halloween to you, too!
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I should say I’m sorry I spooked you….but that would be a lie. 🙂 Yes, the colors were incredible this fall. Sorry you missed them. Next year!!!
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BTW, GORGEOUS autumn tree colors!!!!!
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Wow, that was indeed a scary tale. Well done Pam! 🙂
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Throwing writing hugs to you – thanks for enjoying my Halloween tale. xo
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Back at ya Pam. 🙂
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Excellent Pam, love that story. There’s a reason that the old themes still work.
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Or, another way of putting it Roy, is that “old ghosts never die.” 🙂 Happy Halloween from the other side of the pond.
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Spooktacular post for All Hallow’s Eve. Glad YOU didn’t break a leg runnng away from a Haunted House.
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Me too! I’m steering clear of old mansions from now on…
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I am now TOTALLY in the Hallowe’en spirit! Thank you for brilliantly setting the mood!
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Ah, The Halloween ‘spirit’ -a good pun! Thanks for enjoying.
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Lord have mercy this is a good one. I can’t stand the suspense and I almost did not continue reading. You are good- really good with the words and know how to keep a reader interested.
The photos are marvelous too. Not the hand though. 🙂
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Thank you for allowing me to put you into a state of suspense! I enjoyed it thoroughly. 🤗
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Scary! Not the best house to approach for trick or treat. 😀
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Well, according to scary movies, the ONLY house to approach during Halloween is an old scary mansion! 😉
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That’s right. And if we hear a creepy noise, we must immediately go down into the unlit cellar to investigate.
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Without even a flashlight….
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Exactly!
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I love this story!
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Thank you for enjoying my frightful tale!
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My thoughts as I read this: “The mansion is indeed haunted, the fall was not an accident, Pam!! Stay away from there. . .”
This was a complete frightening story which pulled me in.
Happy Halloween!! 😀
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I think you are an insightful reader! Thanks so much for enjoying. 👻😍
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Ooh Pam, from the title to the images to the way you drew me in to the story, deliciously spooky 🙂
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Thank you for enjoying my spooky story, Andrea. I probably had too much fun writing it… 😋
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Thanks for the shivers! Hope your Holler-Ring is spooktacular
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My holler ring was full of spooky sensations, dark streets, and darker mansions. 🎃 Happy November! 🍁
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Wonderfully spooky story, Pam! xxxx
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I wonder how you all celebrate Halloween there Dianne? Hopefully with lots of candy!
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So spooky! Happy Tuesday ♥
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Thanks for reading my spooky tale! Happy November to you. 🍁
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Trying to catch up on my blog reading. Glad I did not miss your Halloween story that grabs us by the ankles! Well done!
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I love a spooky tale every once in a while. Like once. On Halloween. Otherwise, I get too, well, spooked! xo
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Very scary and realistic—the best kind of horror story! I’ve been buried deep in all the things life throws at a person, but I needed to carve out some time to visit my Peeps! Miss you!❤
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Always LOVE having you visit here, and always enjoy your own writing place of humor and insight. Yeah, what life ‘throws at us’ can be scary enough. Stay calm and breathe. xo
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Yes, the breathing part is kind of essential! 😉
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
WHAT AN INTERESTING STROLL!!!
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Thanks for the re-blog, Jonathan! May you have a less scary stroll in your neck of the woods today – Happy November!
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YUP…JUST COLDER! 🙂
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Pam, reading this out of Halloween season I first thought this was something that had really happened but then a certain fear took hold and it wouldn’t let go! Great fun story, very well done and had me hooked until the end. Pity you only write these once a year!
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I’m so glad I ‘hooked’ you, Annika! Actually I only write ghost stories once a year, but I write lots of suspense stories. Two are published, and working on the 3rd. Hope I can hook you in these, also. 🙂
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Pam, I have got one of your books on my kindle waiting to be read – I feel so behind on everything I want to and guilty emotions are sweeping over me! I seriously look forward to reading this soon and am sure I’ll be just as hooked!
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Nooo, don’t feel guilty!! I’m the same way. I have a dozen books on my Kindle that I want to read by Indie author/bloggers that I follow. I just finally read Amy Reade’s The House of the Hanging Jade. It was worth the wait – excellent! xo
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Oooh, nice and spoooooky! Wish I’d read this before Halloween! I was busy pulling together a party for a bunch of 11-13 year olds. This would have made a good tale to tell around the campfire! 🙂
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I will probably have nightmares now. This is the exact reason I never, ever watch scary movies. I will try reading a scary book occasionally. Are you finished or will it have a happy ending?
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