It happened at the dark of morning, when the sky turned from black to pewter to soft tangerine.
She rose from the surf, waterlogged, the seaweed and starfish whispering her name.
Sassas. Sassas.
Sassas ignored their entreaties to return.
Once a sea creature, she’d long ago left that life, not of her own choosing at first, but now Sassas was comfortable on two feet connected to two tall long legs.
Those legs sent her past the dunes now, up toward the old man’s house. She squinted as the sun climbed higher, offering rosier pinks and a hint of the blue sky that would surround the town in a few more minutes.
“Sarah? Sarah?!”
Sassas scrabbled up the stone steps. Uncle Josh worried about her when she left for a splash in her old place. The ancient place. He’d hooked her when he was a 24-year-old fisherman and she just a 600-year-old sea nymph.
She had changed little. Her fins disappeared within two years, her long green hair turned blonde in the sunlight, and her smile glistened with the newness of Earth living.
“Sarah?”
But Uncle Josh, who renamed her Sarah on that long ago fateful morning, was approaching his 90th year of Earth life.
And Sassas wondered how she’d survive without him.
She fingered the gold band that encircled her thumb. Uncle Josh gave it to her years ago, intoning reverently:
“A reminder of all that grounds you to Earth now: sky, sand, friendship, me.”
Sassass enjoyed the rhythm of life out of water. She followed the lunar patterns of the full moon to the new moon, racing outside every evening to catch a glimpse of the golden orb. To her, that’s what Uncle Josh’s golden band represented.
On sand and mud and concrete, time didn’t swirl like the tides of her old home.
Time disappeared and then slowly reappeared as a crescent shape, partly in this world, and partly in the other dark mysterious universe above.
“Sarah!”
Sassass raced into the house at Josh’s strangled cry. She found him kneeling on the floor, clutching his chest.
“Uncle Josh?” she whispered. His eyes, once bright with hope and promise, faded. Suddenly his face became bright with joy, beaming like the full moon.
And then he collapsed.
No words. But they seldom spoke verbally to each other.
Sassass stood over Uncle Josh’s prone form, not alarmed. Just waiting.
Then she saw it.
His silvery shiny spirt slowly weaved out of his body, shimmering in front of her for a few seconds, and then lifted away and dissolved into the invisible air.
Oh!” Sassass exclaimed, and the air absorbed her realization.
She’d never be alone. Uncle Josh would always be nearby.
When the sun fell into the sea later that day and the moon rose cheerfully above her, Sassass rolled Uncle Josh’s body into his bed blanket, pulled it past the house and the dunes and toward the surf.
His human form would join her spiritual friends in the sea.
Perhaps, it was time for her to join them again too.
Oh wow! 😀 Pam, this is pure magic and I’m sure I held my breath throughout, hanging on your every word. The serenity is carried until the very end and you manage to encapsulate a whole book almost in this short story. I was hooked by Sass/Sarah, her introspective memories whilst the urgent call from Uncle Josh punctuated her stream of consciousness.
I recently read Sarah Winman’s mystical and magical A Year of Marvellous Ways, and the main character is amazing, old now but born of a mermaid … an astonishing and most unusual book.
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Sassas just ‘came’ to me, and I must admit, I love her. I’ve just added A Year of Marvelous Ways to my TBR list. Thanks, Annika.
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The best stories are sometimes these ‘out of the blue’ ones that compel themselves to be written down! Sassas has stayed with me since reading it! 😀😀
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Good one! 🙂
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Thanks for enjoying my sea nymph tale, Linda.
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❤ pure magic, Pamela. xX
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to magic, always! ❤
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What a lovely story 🙂
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From one storyteller to another – I thank you!
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I like story Pamela,
you described the metamorphosis beautifully. Great metaphor. I believe that we all need to reject our shells and to become new people, on the daily basis.We have to compare only with ourselves. Thank you
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It is true, isn’t it? When I wrote this, Sassas came to me with her story. I didn’t realize the depth of what she had to say until much later. Thank you for recognizing it!
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Enchanting story, Pam, with a happy ending despite death and loss. It fits my beliefs that death is not permanent and there is life beyond. Beautifully written, my friend.
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Sassas spoke to me from a hidden place, revealed. And yes, she shared a message I believe in also. Thanks, Molly. ❤
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Such a beautiful and enchanting story Pamela. One of my favourite films is The Secret of Roan Inish filmed not so far from here..
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I’ve never watched this movie, Brigid, but I just put it on my must see list – perhaps with my 9-year-old granddaughter. Thanks for mentioning it here! xo
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I liked it as you had me wondering from the start. For me, an enchanting trip into mythology. Well done, Pam!
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Funny, I’m not “up” with mythology, yet it must be in my head somewhere, since Sassas appeared to me as soon as my pen hit the watery paper. Many thanks, Frank.
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It worked! … so keep doing what you are doing!
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Wow!! An excellent piece of writing. You are amazing my friend. xo
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Many thanks, Darlene. I must give Sassas all the credit though, since she whispered her story into my ear as I wrote. ❤
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Characters do that, don´t they? But it takes a special person to write it down in a way we can all enjoy it!! xo
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A lovely, magical tale, Pam. It’s sort of a happier (celibate?) version of the Selkie myth. 🙂
A beautiful idea of thinking of living on this way, too.
I like the Waterhouse image, and your own photograph is stunning!
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This may sound strange (and a bit ignorant), but I don’t know the Selkie legend/myth. Someone just commented about a movie called The Secret of Roan Inish, which I’ll try to find on Netflix. Perhaps somewhere in my head are the universal myths that we all share; that’s what it felt like as I wrote this – a watery universal legend. Thanks so much for your lovely comment, Merril. Oh, and my photos are from Ocean City, NJ. Surprised? I bet not. 🙂
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I love The Secret of Roan Inish! It’s a movie we watched a few times with our daughters. There’s a Child Ballad, and I first heard it when I was teen–probably Gene Shay’s radio show. Joan Baez did a version of it.
Of course, Ocean City, NJ! 🙂
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A magical tale, well-told. Perfectly lovely, something to ponder as I garden this weekend, tilling old plants into the earth as I start new plants in their place. A transformation, eh?
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Best of luck with your transformative gardening, Ally. I’m doing the same, gardening my pansies and watching the tulips pulse out of the earth. Spring is always a surprise to me – the transformation many times not believed until it happens in front of our eyes. ❤
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Beautiful story, Pam…one to read over and over. ❤
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Thanks, Jill. I’m not sure where Sassas came from, but I feel her story throbbing in my heart. Perhaps she’s always been there? ;-0
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What a special story, Pam. At the risk of repeating many others – magical!
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Compliments are never repetitive – they’re miraculous and always appreciated! 🙂 Many THANKS.
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I thought maybe Uncle Josh would turn into a mermaid … not likely, but when you hook the reader, strange ideas appear. Ha!
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I don’t think Uncle Josh turning into a merman is an odd idea, Marian. He may have his own watery story still to come. Glad Sassas and her story got you “hooked.” ❤
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This is a lovely tale, Pam. Happy even though the old man dies.
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Thanks, Robbie. I agree, I was glad that Sassas celebrated her friend, the old man, but didn’t mourn him, knowing he would always still be with her. ❤
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Lovely read, Pamela. Happy Friday to you!
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Thanks, Carrie. I FINISHED THE BONE CURSE LAST NIGHT! Will review your excellent thriller today. I enjoyed it – the fast-paced thriller was amazing. (But I’ll admit, I had a bit of a nightmare last night – Ben’s adventures scared me that much!)
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Thank you so much, Pam! Nice of you to give it a read and leave a review too. I just saw it on Amazon. I truly appreciate you taking the time to do that. Such a nice one too. So glad you enjoyed it. 😊
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My pleasure… ! … the reading of the book, and then reviewing it. Congrats on a job well done, Carrie.
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Thanks. 😊
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Wasn’t that a tear running down the check story. Love it.
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Thanks for letting Sassas get “under your skin,” Jeanette. One wonders, does she shed her human skin to return to the ocean? xo
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What a ‘Catch’! Uncle Josh… Live on! Lovely, Pam! ♥
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Haha. Yes, Uncle Josh lives on, and perhaps Sassas does too – but as a human, or a sea nymph once again? Many thanks for your comment. ❤
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You have such a creative mind! Good job!
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Several friends who read this post sent me quick e-mails asking: “Where do you GET your ideas?” Oh dear. I have no idea, but I like your take – I’m creative, not weird!! 🙂 Many thanks. xo
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Well I have to say I think there is a bit of weirdness in all of us who are writers. LOL! But yes, mostly we are just creative! 🙂
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Mostly…. 🙂
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Delightful and touching story Pamela! Full of love, magic, and reverence for life. Wonderful!
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Awwww, you make me feel good. Thanks for feeling the reverence I was hoping to express in the story of Sassas, as well as the magic and the love. ❤
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You’re most welcome. I could see this as a longer story too. 🙂
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Sweet story, Pam. Well done.
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Thank you, Anneli. A tale from the sea, for sure. xo
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Dear Pam, this is such a magical and beautiful story. Poetic an mystical tale
that holds me spellbound throughout. The beauty of Sassas/Sarah and Joe; their spirits entwined and dancing together.
His silvery, shiny spirit staying with her and she returning his physical remains to her spiritual friends in the sea.
Thank you for the magic
miriam
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Thank you for entwining your silvery shiny spirit into the story as you read it, Miriam. Now THAT’S magic. xo
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So beautifully told, Pam. I love this story, touching and romantic and full of spirit. Have you ever considered writing fantasy? 😀
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Hmmmm, what an enticing question, Diana. I see myself writing more magical realism than fantasy, but in many cases, I think that’s the same. ❤
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Fantasy is sooooo broad, Pam. I lump a whole bunch of sub-genres under the heading, including mermaids. 🙂 Loved the story!
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True!! To be honest, when I write quick stories every day, I tend toward the fantastic, toward mermaids, fun flying witches, and sprites who play tricks on the sedentary two-legged humans. I guess that’s telling me something… ;-0
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I’ve noticed that. And you’re stories are always great. This one is just stunning. 🙂
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❤
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Your prose sounded lyrical Pam…a hangover or the magic of the story? The sound effects accentuate the mystic nature of this tale that perfectly blends all the elements of story telling…romance, fantasy and suspense. One reading is not enough!
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Such a good question, Balroop. I think the mysticism of the story, the spirit of the sea within, is what makes the prose lyrical. I didn’t set out to write a story that was necessarily lyrical, but as Sassas whispered her secrets to me, the prose followed her sound…. xo
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Oh Pam…you take us to such wonderful
places with each of your ‘wightings’ :))
thank you for this mornings’ journey to the sea as I sit in land locked AZ!!!
love you
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Close your eyes in land-locked AZ, and the sea …. and Sassas…. will bring you to the watery ocean of life, Pat. ❤
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Enchanting, Panela. Loved it.
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Thanks for enjoying my words of enchantment, John. xo
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I like your new name. Sorry about that.
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🙂 Sometimes I go by Pansy, so it fits (you’ll understand from next Friday’s post). xo
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LOL
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What a beautiful tale. I love mermaids, so that made it even more special. Just the right amount of information. Loved the ending.
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I appreciate your comment, Patricia. I’m not as well-informed about mermaids as I should be, but Sassas has me wanting to know more about her kind. And the ending, of course, is only the beginning…. xo
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Enchanting.
And I’m so relieved earthlings didn’t get involved.
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Earthlings can just get in the way, for sure. A young friend encouraged me to read a book called A Nearer Moon by Melanie Crowder. Have you read it Janet? I’m just starting it, but in a mystical way, it shows how Earthlings can get in the way of awe and wonder. 😦 May we reverse that tendency…
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Thanks Pam. I’ve just begun Laurie Buchanan’s upcoming release, The Business of Being (and enjoying her very creative organization of the content). And now Melanie Crowder is on the Recommened ToBe Read List. Thanks.
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I’m reading Laurie’s Business of Being also! Ahh, it’s a beautiful small world.
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Enchanting story. I have always loved the paintings of J..W. Waterhouse… and that one was the perfect illustration for your story.
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I found this J.W. Waterhouse painting soon after I finished writing about Sassas, and heard a whisper inside me that said, “Yessssssssssss.” I think Waterhouse would have liked to have known about Sassas. Hmmmm, but maybe he already did! ;-0
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Wonderful!
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From the depths of the ocean, I thank you Nancy.
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I just finished reading Circe and as I usual when finishing a wonderful book – I am famished for more. How delightful to read your magical post that staved off my hunger for a time.
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OH! I’ve now just put Circe on the top of my To Be Read list, Bernadette. Did you read Madeline Miller’s first book also, The Song of Achilles? I wonder if I should start with that one. I’m so glad Sassas appealed to your reading desires. Sassas surprised me when she appeared under my writing pen. I love that kind of magic. xo
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I didn’t read Song but I am now on the waiting list at the Library for that one. I often end up reading things backward but when I read the review of this book it sounded like it stood independently. I will be waiting to hear what you think of it.
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Yes, I think they’re independent stories. I’ve never read this author, so now can’t wait…
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How lovely!
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Sighhhhhhhhh. Thank you. xo
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🙂
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What a lovely, magical story, Pam. I was enchanted from start to finish! 💗🌼
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Writing:Enchantment:Reading – a triple winner. Thanks so much for enjoying my Sassas.<3
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Pam, what an enchanting story! I absolutely loved it!
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Thanks for being enchanted by the luminous Sassas, Michelle. xo
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❤️
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That was so sweet. I do hope you submit it to an anthology.
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Hmmm, that’s a enchanting idea, Mike. xo
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As always worth the wait…. I had not had a moment to read this until now. Beautiful story Pamela! ❤
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Thanks for reading my sea nymph tale of Sassas and dear Uncle Josh. I’m envisioning the two of them, together, swimming in the depths of the ocean. xo
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I can see that too! What a lovely thought! 💖
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Nicely done, my friend!
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Love your compliments, Sharon. 🙂 Many thanks. xo
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What a lovely and magical story. So beautifully told, Pam. I really hung on every word.
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I’m hoping Sassas is hanging on to life on Earth, perhaps just visiting Uncle Josh in the sea from time to time. Thanks so much Debra! ❤
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Mermaids are my favorite, what a beautiful, enchanting story Pamela.
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I’m so glad Sassas began to whisper her story in my ear, Gerlinde. She made me long for the sea even more than normal. xo
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Simple and gorgeous Pam. Who can’t love a mermaid? I’d be a sucker for those Sirens sweetly singing.
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My guess is that you hear those Sirens off the coast of your beautiful Jersey, more than I do in my landlocked suburb here in NE. I hope to visit Sassas this summer…
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Oh my goodness, this is some of your best — lyrical, magical, enchanting, haunting! It made me long for the inner wisdom of the ages…
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WOW, thanks much, Elizabeth. I can’t take credit for the inner wisdom of the ages that Sassas whispered in my ear – I just took notes! ❤
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Beautiful imagery Pam and a heartwarming story. ❤
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So glad you enjoyed my mermaid tale – 🙂 xoxox
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❤
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What a beautiful post with lovely writing and images. I miss the sea so much. You captured the atmosphere so perfectly.
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Ohhh, many thanks Adrienne. Yes, as I wrote about Sassas, I longed to return to the sea as soon as possible. So glad you felt that longing also.
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Now, I know this is not the same* but I absolutely loved this story! It has so many levels and you could flesh this out and really expand it. *I’m agreeing with Diana.
I equate your sweet sea nymph tale of Sarah (Sassas) to the more complicated fantasy (alien) story in “The Shape of Water.” The ending will enchant you, like yours enchanted us all here. The golden ring and golden moon made me get teary eyed, it is this kind of detail which raises your short stories into mythology level, dear Pam. 💗
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What a tale! Really magical🌚🖤 sad tho
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Sad and yet, hopeful. I think maybe Sarah/Sassas and Uncle Josh are have a great swim within the seas.
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I’m sure they does…there’s always a story “after” the story 🙂 and your ending is the perfect beginning 👋☀️☕️
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Beautiful and magical, Pam! Love it! ☺
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Thank you Sarah. And thanks for reading several of my posts. Special to have you visit. Your work is exquisite. xo
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My pleasure, Pam!
And thanks so much for saying this about my work – this really means so much to me! xoxo ❤
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Lovely, lovely, lovely! Not to mention Waterhouse is a favorite illustrator. Your story reminded me of David Almond’s contribution – Chapter 2 – to the collection titled “Click” – also magical and watery (and benefits Amnesty International.) https://www.kirkusreviews.com/book-reviews/david-almond/click/
Should you see it around, you will fall into Almond’s story. Sassas is already there.
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I’ll check it out. And yes, Waterhouse sends us to a different place, doesn’t he? A better place. A place where beings like Sassas can thrive. ❤
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