“So, it’s your fault he did that?” Debbie asked.
“Well, it was a dare. I didn’t think he’d actually do it,” Judith said.
“What did you think he’d do?” Debbie stared, perplexed, at her best friend. Judith was a scientist, gorgeous, and somehow successful despite being a scatterbrain.
Judith pondered Debbie’s question. “We’ve been dating for 101 days.”
“Not that anyone’s counting,” Debbie rejoined, bemused.
“That’s the problem,” Judith said. “Chris obviously hasn’t been counting at all. I think he’s taken our relationship for granted.”
“So, you invite him over for dinner and open the door naked?” Debbie asked. “By the way, whose dare was it?”
“Oh, way back when we began seeing each other, Chris told me that he had dared his ex-girlfriend to surprise him sometime by picking him up at the airport naked. Before he became chair of the neurology department, he used to travel a lot.”
Debbie shook her head, her dark curls bouncing in disbelief. “I don’t know which is worse, that Chris told you about his ex-girlfriend early in your relationship, or that he told you about that dare.” 
Judith stood up, pacing in her office, white lab coat floating around her. As a molecular physicist, she had her own space at MIT. She’d invited her friend to visit and tour the lab, but her ulterior motive was to discuss the newest development in her life.
“I thought it was endearing. The girlfriend was an introvert, and Chris explained that he’d hoped she’d open up to him, but never did. Thus, they broke up.”
“Because she never got naked at the airport?” Debbie couldn’t stop her sarcasm.
Judith shrugged. “Whatever, I thought it would be fun to see how he reacted when I opened the door to my condo buck naked.”
“And then he did what he did,” Debbie said, searching her friend’s face to try and fathom Judith’s reaction.
“Yup, right there in the hallway. He got down on one knee and proposed.”
The two friends grew silent for a minute. Debbie broke the quiet and asked, “What did you say?”
Judith’s expression changed from pensive to shock at Debbie’s question. “I said no, of course. We hardly know each other!”



I said I would never take a dare because it’s irrational. She dared me to look it up on Google. I said it’s usually stupid and unreliable. But I took the dare and asked why anyone would do such a thing. Geez it did an AI search… people do it because:
“Risk-taking: People may accept dares to take a risk.
Loyalty: People may accept dares to show their loyalty to a group.
Courage: People may accept dares to prove their courage.
Fear of mockery: People may accept dares to avoid facing mockery or name-calling if they refuse.
Bonding: People may accept dares to bond with friends.
Validation: People may accept dares to seek validation from peers.
Sense of belonging: People may accept dares to find a sense of belonging.
Status: People may accept dares to cement their status within a group”
I said it says that it’s dangerous and silly(I said in extrapolation). She persisted: she dared me to turn her into a frog. So I did but she hopped away before I could change her back. Then she kissed the Frog Prince and you know the rest of the story.
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Funny, Doug! My “Google dictionary” added “never combine a dare with a spell.” 🙂
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No, I actually haven’t. But I like your story.
Klausbernd 🙂
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Thanks! It began with the prompt “write about a dare.” We never know what will come from our pen. 🙂
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I don’t think dares ever end well! Judith and Chris need to talk (with clothes on). 😂
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But what’s the fun in that? 🙂 🙂
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😂😂
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Somehow, your story is more believable than I would have expected. O tempora, o mores!
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Romance often leads to incredible stories that are credible. (This one, I promise, is all fiction.) 🙂
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Of course I have, many times! I got dared to skydive and did, dared to swim in the ocean off of Maine in early May and did. But I now have to consider my physical abilities, so swimming the English Channel is out!
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Wow! You are a DAREdevil! (Remember that word, daredevil? Haven’t heard it in a long time.) The nice thing is that your dares were all ‘sports’ related, in a sense, and you obviously were up to the dare. Me? Uh, noooo, no sky diving please. :-0
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Not many people would care to skydive but it was a massively exciting experience! We left the plane at around 13000 feet. When I told my son, who was 82nd Airborne that I’d jumped from higher than he had, his response was “Why’d you want to do that?”
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Enjoyed the story, Pamela, but never dared anyone nor was dared. Now I’m way too old or not old enough!
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Haha. Just give you a few years, huh? Then you’ll be a ready for any dare that comes your way. I’ll have to remember that. 🙂
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Have YOU ever responded to a dare? Yes, a few times. As a teenager I was dared to soap a cute boy’s house’s windows and I did. As an adult I was dared to eat a raw oyster and I did. As for recently, no I have not.
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Readers want to know: did you end up going on a date with “cute boy” who lived (because of you) in a soaped-up house? The oyster was a scary dare. Glad you weren’t allergic. My son dared me to try an oyster when we went out together to a fish place a couple of months ago. (I’ve always said I’ll never eat an oyster.) It was surprisingly good!
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No I didn’t go on a date with the cute boy but years later the girl who dared me to soap the windows married the cute boy. I like fried oysters, just not raw ones.
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WOW! I love the way the Universe works. And has fun with us. 🙂
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What a fun story! I think Judith was right to reject the proposal, at least for now—they really do need to have a chat first.
I don’t recall ever taking a dare, but maybe I did and have just blocked out the memory. 😉 Last night I met an author who wrote a covid romance on a dare. Now THAT’s a dare I would take! Except maybe not a romance … maybe a mystery.
Happy Halloween, my friend! ❤
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In that case, Amy, I DARE you to write another cozy mystery. I love each and every one you write. 🙂
Hope you have a sweetly spooky Halloween. ❤
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A new cozy series is on the agenda for 2025!
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YAY!!!!!!!!
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It’s tempting, especially for those of us who adore challenges, but no–never! Good story!
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Hmmm, interesting answer, Jacqui. I wonder if our ancestors from waaaaaay back when (in the ages that you write about) answered to dares. That’s why they moved to different continents. Hey, maybe we just found the answer to that mysterious question!
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I don’t have my characters responding to dares–never thought about that plot twist. I suppose the answer lies somewhere between what Great Apes would do (like the wily Chimpanzees) and modern hunter-gatherer-nomads.
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I think it was a multilevel marketing guru who said “Dare to be Great.” I took that one.
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Oh, you! I never thought about THAT dare – only the greats take it to that level. Good going!
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😁 Love it.
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Somehow I thought the fact Judith was a molecular physicist and Chris a neurologist would figure more into the story. But maybe not. I do think the fact that you created two main characters as scientists makes the yarn even more ludicrous. (It helps to suspend disbelief, Pam.) Haha!
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But I sweetly disagree, Marian. I believe in the adage the smarter the person (almost genius level) the less common sense they have. 🙂 Chris and Judith may still yet find that they are match made in …. the lab.
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A fun read and good twist with the refusal.
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Glad you enjoyed. As always when I write a story, I didn’t know how Judith would react until I got to the last line. I was proud of her, using a bit of common sense. 🙂
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Uh oh. I don’t think I’ve ever done something on a dare. I’m risk averse.
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I must be risk averse also, Liz, ’cause I can’t think of a dare I took either. It may be that we’re the kind of people who our friends know better than to dare. We’d rather be home reading a book. 🙂
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Makes sense to me!
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I don’t do dares but some funny stories can come from them. A cute story.
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Agreed, Darlene. Dares are much more fun to write about then to actually respond to. [I ended the sentence with ‘to,’ but I just looked it up and saw “Ending a sentence with a preposition (such as with, of, and to) is permissible in the English language.”] Who knew??
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Some of the rules have changed it seems. xo
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That was fun!
I don’t think I’ve every responded to a dare. In fact, I don’t think anyone dared me to do something. Maybe that’s not my crowd. Or maybe I’ve just forgotten.
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Many thanks, Nicki. I laughed when I wrote the end, I must admit. 🙂 I must be in the same kind of crowd you are – we don’t dare each other. Phew!
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Hahaha. I love it! But I thought he might show up at the door with a few of his friends. Your ending is so much better.
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Yikes! Tee hee. 😎
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That was a fun read, Pam. I’m witing for the movie to come out. 🤣🤣🤣
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Wouldn’t that be fun!?! I guess R rated though. 😏
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I don’t do dares! But I challenge myself to the fullest as long as there is thoughtful benefit to the challenge. I did accept a challenge that the first one of three ladies that lost 50 pounds got $50. I won. Now I need to do it again.:( I think dares are made by people who want to make someone else look as dumb as they appear to be. Loved the story and that she turned down the proposal.
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Oh, what a dare, Marlene! I guess the incentive was enough to lose the weight. I agree, dares are generally made to make someone look silly or do something that they shouldn’t. I think Judith made a smart decision holding off on Chris. But she must have looked quite remarkable ‘buck naked’ for him to suddenly propose. 🙂
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That was such a fun story with a nifty ending–I love your weekly “inspirations”, Pam!
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THANK you – I like reading fun stories with nifty endings, so I enjoy writing them as well. Flash fiction is a challenge, so I’m glad the endings work out fairly quickly! 🙂
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A definite LOL 🙂 After a eyebrow-lifting conversation.
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I must have been in a naughty mood when I wrote this. However, it’s not totally fiction since one of my friends did greet her husband at the airport au naturel (under her coat). 🙂
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Ha! The last line was a riot. I wasn’t expecting it, and loved it. Judith has her head on right after all. What a fun story, Pam. You got me laughing first thing in the morning.
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Then I have done a GREAT job, because these days laughing first thing in the morning helps us get through all the fog of news and worry about ‘what the world is coming to,’ etc. 🙂 THANK you.
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You got that right!
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Ha! I couldn’t wait to find out what he did! Great story, Pam 🙂
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I LOVE a good hook. 🙂 Hey, since you’re such a book lover, have you read The Life Impossible by Matt Haig? I’m hooked!
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Oh I haven’t but I just read about it!
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Ha! I couldn’t wait to see what he did. Great story, Pam!
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Thanks for enjoying my flash of romance with a hook. I think Chris fell ‘hook, line and sinker’ when Judith opened her door. 🙂
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Fun tell, Pam!
My childhood resounded with cries of . . . “I double dog dare you!” But as for the specifics, my mind is drawing a blank.
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I remember those ‘double dares,’ whatever they meant. If you dare someone why do you have to double dare them? I never figured that out (and I never responded to the dare). Boring am I. Except when I write. Glad you enjoyed my little flash romance. ❤
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As a child there were lots of dares between us kids – like I dare you to ring the old lady’s doorbell and run away. Stuff like that. Innocent enough. But nothing like your story. The ending was really fun, Pam.
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Yes, dares get more complicated when we become adults. 😳I’m not a daredevil myself, but it was fun to write about this dare. We adults are sillier than kids!!! 😏
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I enjoyed the story. Pam, have I missed the next episode in the story of the two friends and son at the haunted house? When someone goes back in time?
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I’ll get back to my “Ghost Writer” story soon, Jennie. You’re not the first who has asked for new chapters. 🤓
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I’m so glad! 😀
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Great story — brilliantly told. Wow, Pam, you are a master!
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Thank you! I love writing and in doing so, meeting these fun characters. 😍
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You had me going the whole time and laughing and such a funny story, Pam. Might I dare ask it it was real or at the least, where do you dream these up?
Lol💕😂
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Total fiction. I don’t know where the stories come from but I sure enjoy the writing ride. 😁
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Thanks for always amusing us with your great stories. ❣️
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Wonderful! So glad you made her say ‘no’. 😀
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She’s a “smart cookie.” 😉
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Yes, she is. 😉
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same goes for me! love this!
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Pam’s stories are always good but I really, really liked this one. 😀
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Blowing kisses my way to you. Mwahhh!
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lol – hugs to you!
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🙂 Judith has more smarts than she shows, at times. Book smarts, yes, common sense – well, finally, when it counts. 🙂
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Love how your mind works, Pam! This is hysterical!! Thanks for my belly laugh for
today. Can’t think of a dare like this one!!!
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My stories do make you wonder about my funny little brain, don’t they? Yikes. Oh well, LOVE belly laughs. THANKS. xoxo
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A fun story – loved the ending 🙂
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Hi Andrea – thanks. A bit silly, but sometimes silly is just what we need. 🙂
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This is very entertaining, Pam. PS I wrote a blog post explaining how to create an ebook for a children’s book. In case you are interested.
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I saw it and thank you, Robbie! Still makes my head spin. 🙂 (My fault, not yours…!!!!)
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This was such a great beginning to the post – I couldn’t possibly not read it! And a very funny ending – makes sense to me!! 🤣
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Common sense, perhaps, huh? 🙂 🙂 I say always beware a person who gives you a dare.
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What a wild conversation, Pam! No! I’ve never dared anyone and have never accepted a dare. I like to be predictable.
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Predictability is good. 🙂
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