(Check out the tab above,”The Wighting Life, ” to read about a pantoum poem.)
When we walk along the shoreline
Best friends since the dawn of our time
Seagulls laugh at our giggles
As we remember the times gone by.
Best friends since the dawn of time
Speak truths never left unsaid
As we remember the times gone by
Pelicans soar above.
Speak truths never left unsaid
As the sand brushes our toes
Pelicans soar above
Sorrow creases our furrowed brow.
As the sand brushes our toes
Conversation turns to the past
Sorrow creases our furrowed brows
Silence surrounds our words like a hug.
Conversation turns to the past
Ex-husbands, sick children reappear
Silence surrounds our words like a hug
The past is undone as we speak.
Ex-husbands, sick children reappear
Words send them away with the waves
The past is undone as we speak
The present reveals the sun’s light.
Words send them away with the waves
Friendship sooths the rough edge of life
The present reveals the sun’s light
The future is ours at sunset.
Friendship sooths the rough edge of life
Best friends since the dawn of our time
The future is ours at sunset
When we walk along the shoreline.
Just lovely. You have done it again.
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This poem meant so much to me, especially today when I heard sad news about a high school friend. How true are your words and how beautiful.
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“Words send them away with the waves”. My favorite line, beautiful.
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Love the rhythm of this … so clever. Soon I hope to have less work/projects on my desk and more writing in my life once again. Thanks for the inspiration. 🙂
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THANKS for finding my poem, which I posted a number of years ago. I just re-read it (thanks to your comment) and felt thankful all over again for friendship. Keep on being inspired, and keep on writing! ❤
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