Before further conversation, I grabbed my brown suitcase, the one Derek was still holding in his hand. “I think I’ll make the switch before we forget,” I said with a wry laugh.
Ignoring me, he tapped his finger on his forehead. “I knew I recognized you. Bob. Bob’s girlfriend.”
“Ex- girlfriend,” I interrupted quickly. (Story begins with The Wrong One and then Summertime Baggage.)
Derek continued, “At my parent’s Christmas party in Brookline. Bob and I were…”
“Harvard college roommates,” I interjected, again. “Yes, I know. Two degrees of separation. Your parents are great friends with mine – I guess they met up at some cruise in ….”
“Bermuda! Right, it’s all coming back to me. You’re Molly!”
I examined the luggage tag on my suitcase, “Well, look at that,” I said breezily.
But then Derek began to blush a light rose that deepened into scarlet. “You didn’t open my suitcase, did you?”
I pointed to the one I’d just removed from my bedroom. “You mean that one?” I walked over and examined it. “Look at that. Same make as mine. Maybe even same year.”
Derek chuckled nervously.
“Let’s see. I bought my Tumi two years ago. Here in Boston. And you?”
“I can’t say,” Derek replied. “It’s not actually my suitcase.” He shot me a strange look.
I feared a lie might be unfolding. What a disappointment. When I met Derek at that Christmas party, I liked him immediately. He seemed to be everything Bob was not: secure, unpretentious, funny, and dare I say, interested in me. We had both locked eyes over our champagne with a quick shock of mutual attraction.
But Derek’s parents were my parents’ new besties. A coupling between Derek and me would send them into swoons of delight. Dismayed by the idea, I had turned my back on the spark.
I now noticed that Derek sat on my couch with arms folded, slumped in defeat. I couldn’t help feeling sorry for whatever girl-mess he’d gotten himself into.
I sat next to him and gave him the benefit of my doubt. “If it’s not your suitcase, Derek, whose is it?”
He stunned me by stating, “It belongs to my boss.”
WHAT? I stood up, peeved and perplexed. “Your boss wears a see-through negligee and eats See’s Candy?”
Derek’s red face blanched white. “That’s what’s in there?”
“Of course that’s what’s in there. Don’t act so innocent. I thought it was my suitcase, opened it up and had the shock of my life.”
Derek’s chest began to shake. His eyes lit up like a firecracker, and in seconds, he roared like a happy lion. “She told me…” he began before laughter took over again. “I thought ….” He bent over to catch his breath.
“She who? Told you what?” I should have been enormously annoyed at this point, but watching Derek laugh was like seeing the sun rise over the ocean. Everything became brighter. Rosier. Happier.
After three deep breaths, Derek stood up and placed his big hands – like lion’s paws – on top of my shoulders while staring straight into my eyes. A jolt hit us both so hard we jumped back. But then he stood his ground and calmly explained. “My boss is Grace Jenkins. Our plane landed 20 minutes late, as you know. Grace was overdue to meet up with her husband – an anniversary surprise she’d planned for the evening. So she grabbed a taxi and asked me to pick up her brown Tumi and deliver it to the Liberty Hotel on my drive home.”
My mouth opened and closed. Shut up, I told myself.
“Grace begged me to not open the suitcase under any circumstances. ‘State secrets,’ she said to me.” Derek released a loud guffaw.
I marched over to the secret suitcase and unzipped the top.
“What are you doing?” Derek asked, his hilarity squashed.
I opened the box of candy, disregarding the rest of the “anniversary” contents.
“After all this, I think we deserve something sweet,” I declared.
“I think I’ve already found my treat,” he murmured.
And the switch was complete.
So many great guesses in last week’s post (Summertime Baggage). The winner is joyroses 13. She will receive a copy of my romantic suspense – The Right Wrong Man. If it wasn’t so warm here in the East Coast, I’d include a box of chocolates, too. 🙂
Loved it!
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Glad you enjoyed the three-parter, Mary. I like happy endings. 🙂
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Love it, Pam. It’s not at all what I was expecting. That’s the best surprise. 🙂
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This is why I’m a ‘pantster,’ Norah. (I write by the ‘seat of my pants’ – no plotting involved). I had no idea why or how the switch occurred – I let the characters tell me. As Robert Frost said, “No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. No surprise in the writer, no surprise in the reader.” Wise man. ❤
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Clever – both of you! 🙂
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A sweet surprise indeed! 🙂
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How I love surprises. The characters wrote this story for me, Merril. Robert Frost explained it once: “No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. No surprise in the writer, no surprise in the reader.” xo
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Love it! A sweet surprise and a new beau!
Have a great weekend, Pam.
Sharon
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Love, and candy, win in the end. Happy endings for all. And happy weekend to YOU, Sharon. xo
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I can’t decide whether I love the happy ending or if I’m disappointed that this is the end of the story 🙂
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Awww, thanks Joanne. When I began this story, I had NO IDEA what the heck was going on. So much fun to just write it and let Molly and Derek tell their story. I’m gonna miss them. ❤
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Wonderful conclusion! So much fun to read. A sweet ending all around. 😊
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You know me, Carrie. A romantic through and through. 🙂
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Aw…I loved this Pam! There’s nothing better than a happy ending. Enjoy your weekend!
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I’m sure this is why you and I enjoy writing romance, Jill. Happy endings are what we all wish for, need, and work for in our literature and in our lives. xo
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Entertaining with a very satisfying ending. You put a smile on my face!
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I’m the kind of writer who prefers to put smiles, not frowns or worry lines, on my readers’ faces. So you have made me a happy writer! Thanks, Patricia. 🙂
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Nicely done, Pam! Loved it!
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Praise from you means a lot, Anneli. Thank you, thank you. ❤
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I’m flattered, but I really mean it. You have a real gift for writing these “bits.” It’s harder to get a short piece just right. You don’t have as much time to wander through the word bank, as you do with a novel. You need to pick just the right words to get all the elements of a good story happening pronto.
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Great ending!! A nice twist as to who Derek turned out to be! I think both parents will be thrilled.
LOL at his boss and the “top secret!” She is probably anxiously awaiting her suitcase, but I have a feeling it may be delayed 🙂
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YOU’RE THE WINNER of a copy of THE RIGHT WRONG MAN! E-mail me at pam.wight@colettawight.net, and I’ll get your address and send the softback off to you – perfect summertime reading. Congrats!
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Oh that is Awesome! Thank you so much! 🙂
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Perfect! Jeanette ❤️
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Glad you enjoyed, Jeanette. So special to see you at my Birds of Paradise Library presentation in CA. xo
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Awesome turn of events. It’s great when the Universe conspires to place us in the right place at the right time with the right person . . . with Chocolate!
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Chocolate and romance are universally enjoyed, as the Universe well knows. 🙂
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Awww. My guess was wrong but the story was right. 🙂 Well done, Pam.
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But your guess was oh so much fun. Thanks, Diana.
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Hahaha 😉 That’s awesome, Pam! I’m still laughing about it all. Congrats to the winner of the book too – a sweet treat indeed 🙂
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Laughing is good, Christy. We need lightness and fun in our lives right now. So glad you enjoyed. xo
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YAH! Loved the next chapter… is that all there is?? 🙄
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I figure we better give Molly and Derek some privacy now, as they get to know each other. 🙂 ❤
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Oh alright!! 😉
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You are so cute. 🙂
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Nice ending! Love your ‘Sweet Treat’ Pam! You are a wonderful web weaver! 🙂
Congrats to Joyroses for the guessing prize.
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Thank you Balroop. Perhaps I am a spider in some sense, weaving story webs. Love that image. 🙂 Happy end-of-June to you. Summer is going by waaaaaay too fast.
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I love happy endings…and especially this one that comes as a big surprise.
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I will gladly admit that happy endings are on my top list of what I want in the stories I read and write. So glad you were surprised with this one. Love your comment – thank you!
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Such great twists! I l LOVED it!
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Phew! Glad you liked the ending, Donna. I liked twists in my yoga…and in my books. 🙂
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I absolutely loved this little tale. You are so good when keeping your readers in suspense. Loved reading this. So well written.
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Thank you, thank you!! I’m so glad the ending satisfied you. It was a blast to write it – my writing fingers were led completely by Derek and Molly. xo
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A wonderfully upbeat and sweet ending…just perfect, Pam! 😀 Any more serials in store for us? Wishing you a lovely weekend. 😀❤️
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Ohhhh, I’m sure I have a few more serial stories in my writing pocket. Perhaps later in the summer. I love visiting you virtually over at your blogging place, Annika. Now, if only one of these days it could be ‘in person.’
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I likewise love reading your blog, Pam…it would be great though, I agree, to meet ‘in real’ person’ – I could see us chatting for hours and hours! 😀
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👥🗣 for sure! 😊
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This is a good one!! Well done. A perfect ending too.
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Many thanks for enjoying my flash-fiction-twisty-romance, Darlene. xo
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Well I wasn’t expecting that! Like others I’m rather disappointed it’s over now. Sigh. Sign of an amazing writer I think. Many thanks for the series.
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Molly, Derek and I enjoyed entertaining you. A writer’s dream – to be asked for more. THANK YOU. xo
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Giggled! Delightful! Love these characters. You made my day!
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And your GIGGLE is delightful, Becky. 🙂
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Great finish Pam! xxx
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Phew, thanks Dianne. I had NO IDEA how or why Derek had those ‘items’ in his suitcase. I was quite relieved when he explained the whole funny mess to Molly. 🙂
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Ahhh! Loved it!
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Yay! Thanks for enjoying the ‘end of the story’ and Derek and Molly’s re-acquaintance, Judith. ❤
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I hope our suitcases arrive in Florida without these shenanigans.
Your happy endings are sweet too. What a talent you have for gently jerking the reader around – ha!
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I hope your suitcases arrive in Florida too. But perhaps a silky negligee and box of candy wouldn’t be such a bad surprise? 🙂
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Ha! So I was right? Derek was the son of the parent’s friend? LOL. Great story Pam! 🙂
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You guessed it sooooo well, Debby. So I would like to ‘gift’ you an Kindle edition of THE RIGHT WRONG MAN. I just have to figure out how to do that – can you give me some instructions? You’re probably good at some of this techno stuff. Congratulations!!! ❤
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Wow, thanks Pam! So exciting! Well, Hugh Roberts and I have posted about Amazon’s shady certificate procedure and learned the work around after so many of us would receive Amazon gift cards for Amazon.com and couldn’t access them. So you know, if you’re ever contemplating sending a gift voucher from Amazon, make sure you know what country that person is from (me Canada) and purchase the certificate from THEIR Amazon site so it is usable in their currency. Alternatively, you can send a PDF file directly to someone’s email, or a file in any form for that matter. ❤
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What I thought I’d do is ‘gift’ you the e-book of The Right Wrong Man via the Kindle. Do you read on a Kindle, Debby? If so, if I can have your e-mail address, this should work…hopefully. :-0 But I’m reading what you and Hugh say, and I would be sure to do it from the Amazon Canada store. xo
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Oh, that would be lovely Pam. Thanks so much, how exciting! I enjoy your writing and look forward to reading this summer, and reviewing of course! 🙂 d.g.kaye.writer@gmail.com 🙂
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Unexpected, warm and fun Pam, I loved the intriguing story and the happy ending 🙂
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I’m so glad you were intrigued and enjoyed the happy ending. I’m a believer in happy endings. I think I’ll ‘talk’ about that some more next Friday. Hmmmmmmmmmmmm. ;-0
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I just love reading your stories.
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Well, you just warmed this writer’s heart. Thanks always, Gerlinde. ❤
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Really enjoyed that Pam – great fun, when I (like Derek!) thought it might be going in an altogether darker direction. Thanks for helping me to start my day with laughter 🙂 Blessings, Harula x
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Light is always better than dark, Harula. Except with chocolate, of course. I like my chocolate dark. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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What fun! I enjoyed it very much and like a happy ending too with my romantic heart. Cheers!
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Truly sweet with pun intended, Pam! Thanks for the ride.
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I want to see this “movie,” (cheese and all; I’m reading these in reverse order). 🙂
You do have a way of creating unique settings and characters we care about, all within very few words, Pam.
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I cannot believe I read this and liked it but was looking through the comments and nope. I could not find my thoughts. So sorry, Pam.
I was impressed with how this story ended and so happy for the woman who had been disappointed until the real story came up!! Yay, a man who doesn’t even look at his boss’s suitcase. A real keeper! 😊
I would have eaten the candy the minute I opened the luggage. . . Great twist and so “sweet!” 🍫
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