I scrutinized the man under veiled eyes. My long dark eyelashes were one of my vanities, and in times like these they came in useful. (The Exit Door)
Since when did I follow a complete stranger ( I wondered – what’s an incomplete stranger?) out of a social setting where I knew at least half the participants, toward a “wonderful café” he suggested?
“George,” the blue-jeaned “complete” stranger said as if reading my mind. And no, I don’t do this often.”
“Do what?” I asked.
“Take a chance on a woman I know nothing about.”
“What are the chances?” I retorted, and then answered my own question. “I suppose chances are we both wanted to escape the normal drudgery of small talk.”
By then we were out of the high-end hotel that housed the fundraiser and strolled on the wet pavement. June in Boston can be soggy and humid, and the city was being true to form. I touched my hair and felt my coif frizz.
The old-fashioned city lights gave off a warm glow, and I felt marginally safer. George smiled while lightly holding my elbow as we crossed the street. “I have a feeling that you prefer large talk,” he noted as he led me toward a street corner, turned, and then opened a dark green door with a sign overhead: “Sullivan’s.”
“Sullivan’s what?” I wondered out loud as we entered a tavern seemingly lit only with candles on small round tables spread graciously apart from each other. A curved mahogany bar spanned the entire right side.
“Bruce Sullivan, at your service,” replied a white-haired gentleman as he led us to one of the round tables toward the back of the room. “Sullivan’s Respite – Sullivan’s Bar – Sullivan’s Comfort Food – take your pick,” he added as George and I settled in.
“I’ll take the comfort food and a pint from the tap,” George requested immediately. His eyes twinkled. “Bruce, meet my, um, new friend. New friend, meet my brother.”
I stood up, surprised and for some reason, relieved. “Mandy. Mandy Shepherd,” I said pulling my arm behind me as I remembered that shaking hands was no longer de rigueur. Sitting back down I added, “George and I have known each other for less than an hour. Do you vouch for him?” For some reason, I felt as if I could trust Bruce. I liked him instantly, and usually my instincts didn’t fool me.
Bruce pulled up a chair at the table as if to join us. Then he faced me, his white mustache hovering over an almost beatific smile.
“George is simply the best man I know. Not only is he a minister; he’s holy. Not only has he earned a doctorate in philosophy, he’s a philosopher; not only is he my brother, he’s my best friend.” Bruce stopped to catch a breath: “And not only is he single, he’s a dedicated monogamist.”
I laughed out loud and turned to George. “No wonder you suggested this ‘café.’ Okay, I’m hooked. No reason to dangle me on the line. Now, what’s on tap?”
Absolutely wonderful story, you had me smiling and laughing.
Hope the visit to the cafe ended successfully.😊.
miriam
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I am guessing that George and Bruce and Mandy enjoy each other’s company for years to come. 💝
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Great story 🙂
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Glad you enjoyed Derrick!
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Funny story.
Thanks for sharing.
All the best
The Fab Four of Cley
🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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I find it fun to watch (write about) two lonely people find each other and begin the slow process of discovery and love. ❤️
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A brother with a tall story. Sounds like Mandy fell for it. I wonder what these two are up to.
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One DOES wonder, doesn’t one? 🙂
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Who can but not?
(Does that even make sense?)
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Wonderful story, Pam. Thanks for sharing! Enjoy your weekend!❤️
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Somehow I’m late to return the comment, and it’s already the middle of the following week. Here’s to weekends and reading fun stories! 🙂
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OK. I’m hooked, and now I’ll be waiting for the next installment. 😀
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You’re doing a sublime job of serial -writing yourself, Merril! ❤
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Thank you, Pam. 😀
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Sounds like George might be a catch! Where is that cafe? Perhaps Bruce is availability also? I’ve got this single friend…
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Down at the corner of your town’s Main Street – the cafe/bar with the green door. 🙂
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I’ll CHIME in: What a hook! And wherever did you find the cartoon? Well, maybe it inspired the story somehow.
It is not lost on me that at least one of your characters is mature (old?), but you didn’t use either word, simply dropping the phrase “white mustache.”
Storyteller extraordinaire, Pam!
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My characters are never “Old,” Marian. Some are just more mature than others. 🙂 I found the cartoon on Pixabay, which is a wonderful site that allows users to download illustrations without citations. But in the WP description box, I always include the link. ❤
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I LOVE this!!
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I LOVE that you love my brotherly love (and loyalty) story. 🙂 ❤
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A great bit of tale-spinning here my friend. These characters are worth developing.
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I’ll keep Mandy, George and Bruce in my “character arsenal,” Darlene. THANKS! xo
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I’m hooked too! I love your short stories Pam!
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Thanks so much Brad. Somehow these “people” start knocking on my writing brain, insisting that I “tell their story.” I’m happy to oblige. 🙂
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I like this story. Cute and sweet and perfectly appropriate! Happy Weekend, Pam.
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Thanks! Hard doing a follow up but these two seem like a good match up. 😙💚
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Love the last line. Your book arrived yesterday. In W’port for alumni weekend. Peter getting an award. I’ll send photos. Xo
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I’m going to hold you to your promise to send photos, Nancy. So glad you were there to applaud our college friend and AMAZING actor. ❤
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I loved this!
I have visited Boston, the visit was much too short! While there we visited a pub that served the best apple cider I’ve ever had! I hope you had a glass of that! Delicious…
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I’m allergic to apples (I know, weird) so I’ll stick with the Boston lager. 😛Come for a longer visit next time!
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I would love to! Plus I’d like to visit Salem… I didn’t realize it was so close to Boston…
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Yay! I am so glad you decided to continue this story…
And like Merril, I shall patiently wait for the next installment 😉
And uh… could you send a George my way?
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George would be PERFECT for you! Start manifesting my friend. 😌
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I was thinking the very same thing, Pam 😉
I’m workin’ on it!!
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I love the positivity of your characters Pam… trust is a great virtue. I would say… the chances are quite bright.
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Love can’t occur without trust. 💝
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But it may not last!
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That’s why love can cost so much pain. 😔
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What an intriguing part 2. Now where is this going to go? I like the way Many takes language literally too. Asking herself questions like a fill-in-the-blank game. I hope the story continues!
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I’m with Darlene. Wonderful characters that are worth developing. I wasn’t ready for the story to end.
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I’m not sure there’s ever truly an ending to any good story. 🙂 Thanks, Patricia!
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Yes, I’m hooked. Good one, Pamela.
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Thanks for enjoying my flash fiction, John. So much fun to write@!
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Wonderful story! I never want your stories to end…I always want to read the next part! You do know how to hook your readers!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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I’ve never considered myself a fisherwoman, except as a writer who likes to put her readers on a hook. 🙂 THANKS, Linda.
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I love happy endings!
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They’re the best!! 💖
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Delightful!
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A light frolic compared to your stories, oh Warrior One!
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Ohhhh, please tell me this is the beginning of a new novel! I want to read the REST of the story!
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I have about five “potential novels” started like this. Perhaps this one will go top of the list, Elizabeth. 🙂
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I like it … and a good chuckle ending. However, isn’t this the continuation of a story form several weeks ago?
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Hi Frank. Yes this is a continuation from the Friday before story called exit doors. Everyone wanted to know what happened when the couple left. So I gave a little continuation. 😚
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Oh what fun! ❤
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Looking forward to where this romance is going.
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To answer your closing line – “Yes, you did. Hook, line and sinker!” 😀
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Y A Y!! 🎣
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I am hooked too. What a captivating writer you are.
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Thank you so much. Mandy and George captivated me and then when Bruce joined the picture-it was an easy hook. 😚
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I loved this story which reminded me of a humorous tale that my wife likes to tell. After her mom and dad divorced, her mom eventually began dating another man (Al). They were good together. He was quite the character, a good man with a big heart but an equally big mouth.🤣 He had many opinions about everything and wasn’t afraid of sharing those with people he didn’t know well. Once the two of them were at a dinner party, and he cornered some lady and began talking her ear off in his normal fashion. He wasn’t known for being politically correct. After he carried on his usual way, using some of the most colorful language, he finally paused to ask the woman, “So, what do you do?”
Her reply was hysterical. “I’m a nun.” For once, Al was speechless.
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What a great story! Good for your mom in law to put up with Al – because of all of his GOOD qualities!
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That was a great ending and a brotherly sale! Loved it:)
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It’s wonderful to see a good brotherly relationship, isn’t it? 😁
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I agree with the others. Hooked from the story from the beginning and a clever ending. Definitely a hint of romance, maybe more, going on there. Great writing as usual, Pam 🙂
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Writing is never work for me because it’s so much fun! Thank you thank you Mabel.
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You are welcome, Pam. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. Much love to you ❤
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I’m hooked too (for my single daughter)!
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To be a good catch one needs to swim in the water. I hope your daughter likes to swim! 😌💚
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Well, she’s in the Navy… She’d better!
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Haha. TRUE! xo
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A complete success! Loved it.
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Wow! Hooray! I’m always worried about disappointing on the “second parter.” Thank you thank you 🙏 😁
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You know, I was wondering if this was going to take some bizarre and unexpected turn, and I’m glad it ended this way. Nice story. And hopeful.
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It’s true that sometimes I go with speculative fiction or fantasy. But Mandy and George and Bruce just led me on this sweet engaging path. I think we need that these days! 💝
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I loved this! What a great catch 🙂
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To be a good catch we have to swim in that water, Barbara! 😏
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Ah, that’s true!
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That was the best, sweet story I’ve read in a long time. Can you please write a Hallmark movie for us. Theirs are getting kind of stale and this is just so refreshing!! I know you can. 😉
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I love your confidence in me Marlene. Yes the Hallmark movies are just too formulaic and bland. I totally agree! I’ll wait for the phone call from them. 😛
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Maybe I should give them a heads up. 🙂
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This is a lovely story, Pam. I hope there will be more of it coming.
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Thanks Robbie. I think I might have to start thinking of doing some serial e-book shorts. Short and fast and fun. Readers seem to enjoy these. 💗
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LOL, not many romantic tales can make me smile, Pam, but you surely did here. Delightful. Hugs on the wing!
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What fun is romance if we can’t smile along the way, Teagan? Thanks for the great compliment. And for the smiles. 😌
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Well done! You really are a talented writer!
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Thank you so much Ann. The writing seemed easy with Mandy showing me the way. 😍
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Haha, you got me hooked on your story, Pam! Waiting for some more!
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I do enjoy writing stories that include hooks and romance and a bit of suspense. Much fun to read as well as write. Thank you Miriam! PS. I finally got my new book Flashes of Life as an ebook for Kindle and tablet. Hooray!
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Oh congratulations on having your new book as an eBook for Kinde, Pam. I downloaded the ePub of Flashes of Life, but it opens with Chrome extension automatically. When I shutdown the computer and turn on the next day, it disappeared and I had to download it again. I emailed Borgo last week to ask how I could keep the ePub in another Reader, they haven’t answered me.
I have my books on Barnes and Noble and a couple other places. Amazon by far is more efficient and user friendly.
I guess I must find time to read through your book so I don’t have to worry about download it again. 😊
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Miriam – if you don’t have luck with the ePub download staying (what’s THAT all about I wonder?) let me know and I’ll gift you a Kindle version, happily!. ❤
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I’m relieved. I was hoping that nothing untoward or sinister happened to Mandy.
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We are all told over and over again to not go away with strangers. Mandy certainly lucked out in this case. I have a feeling she was mature enough and wise enough to have honed her intuition by now. 💙
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What a lovely introduction! I warmed to all three of these characters. Sounds like a happy ending is in store!
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I happen to prefer happy endings! 🤓
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Great story
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Glad you enjoyed! Thanks.
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Oh I absolutely loved that😊. He certainly hooked me too lol. Now I want to get to know George too!
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Smiling. I think you’ll have to get in line – many who’ve read Mandy’s story want to meet George! Mandy says she has first dibs. 🙂
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Amazing share❤️😊
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A wonderfully cute little story, Pam. We all need a brother like Bruce. I wonder who the female equivalent could be and where this sister would work? 🙂
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Brothers can be quite loyal! I remember when I was single and my brother and his wife took me to a bar “to meet people,” but every time a man approached me, my big-armed, in-shape brother got in his face and said, “what’s your intention?” 🙂 It was funny….
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This story has taught me that one can find love in very easiest ways, without putting alot of an effort ,it can just come , just like that ❤❤what a beautiful story 💗💗
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So right. Just be open and love may find a way in. ❤
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Your phrase “…prefer large talk…” gave me pause, Pam. It makes perfect sense, yet is the first time I have heard this phrase. Trust and gut instincts are often reliable. This entire post made me smile. 😀Yes, a fun romance. Yes, you have me hooked.😀
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Nice post
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Funny story Pam. Who’s who in the zoo? 🙂 xx
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