“What?”
“That’s her name, ‘Be Bop a Lula.’”
Jill inwardly rolls her eyes. Jason has been softly pushing her for more during the last year. More time together, more intimacy, more thoughts of moving in together. She’s a ‘less is more’ kind of woman. At least, that’s what she’s become.
“Why is that the plant’s name?” Jill asks, pointing to the hanging plant in his hand.
“Well, doesn’t she look like a Be Bop a Lula?”
The large plant is all curling lacy strings of leaves. Jill has no idea what kind it is. Jason is asking her with his eyes, now, if he can hang it in the corner of her bedroom. She nods, hesitantly.
Her apartment is simple, clean, no accessories or pictures on the wall and no color. White walls. Light-wood floors. White countertops. She craves simple. Unadorned. And now this, this, Be Bop a Lula, is adding a large spark of green.
They move to the living room, and Jill’s eyes turn to the corner, where an intruder sits unwelcome. “Benji,” Jason called this large Ficus plant when he brought it last week. She protested, but he gave her all this scientific/biologic reason why plants are good for a home. Oxygen and cleaning the air and stuff.
Jill emptied the air in herself four years ago when her husband and little girl died in a car crash. She has no reason to live, but her body keeps on moving, working, and now even dating, but she feels colorless.
“One more please?” Jason asks, his dark brown eyes pleading.
Jason and Jill met in an elevator nine months ago. A man began to harass Jill in the small space, and Jason came to her defense and called the building supervisor. Then he asked her for a coffee date. Then a dinner date. She acquiesced. Why? Because he didn’t rush her; he was quiet enough that she began to talk. He touched her in places she thought were devoid of feeling.
And now, Jason brings some life into her space.
Jason walks over to the front door, where another plant is sitting outside, waiting for permission to enter. This one is tall and spiky, prickly with personality.
“I call her ‘Hope,’” Jason explains while he picks up the potted plant with a grunt and places it in the small dining room corner.
Jill’s gray eyes lighten as she considers Benji and Be Bop a Lula and Hope.
Perhaps. Perhaps.
Beautifully done
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Thank you Derrick. To lots of plants in our life. 💚
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wonderful
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💚💚💚💚
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Love this and the song!❤️
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And the name of the main character. I did think about you when reading Pam’s story. 🙂
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Hi Liesbet!❤️
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I think Jill and her name may have inspired me to write this story, considering the green thumb she has! 👍 💚
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Thanks for letting me borrow your name❣️
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Beautifully written, Pam. I could imagine this woman starting to bloom again.
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And what a lovely image that is!
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😊
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This is very nice, Pam. Comforting, in a way.
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Yes Robbie, and plants do give such great comfort. And hope! 💚
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♥️💯
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Jill’s beginning to green – lovely Pam thank you 🦚
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What a wonderful way of thinking about it Susan. May we all stay green and vibrant!
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I’m pulling for her. And for them as a couple.
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I am also. And I also believe in the power of plants! 💚💓
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Evocative, and very true to life.
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Thank you thank you! Very true to life and reminder of what nature does for our soul. 💚
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Lovely….on so many levels. The nuances — daring to let life into her space (even if only a plant or two) after profound loss? Emotional risk-taking and I get that. Something I never consciously thought about and yet I relate to it. ❤️
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Many thanks for your thoughtful comment. Yes I think sometimes we can only let in a little life at a time after loss: maybe a plant or two; then maybe a dog or cat; and then maybe a human being. 💚
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My heart is full, thanks to you, Pamela. This is just beautiful. I can feel her allowing love to enter her life again… plant by plant. Jason is a loving and understanding man.
And thanks for the ear worm… 😉
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Sorry about the earworm but at least it’s an earworm with a nice beat! 🐛 🎵 😃
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Actually, it’s a great earworm!
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Lovely story, Pam. Hope and hope growing.
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Yes, what a beautiful way of thinking about it. As the plant grows hopefully so does the hope. 💚
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This is wonderful. I’ve never heard Be Bop a Lula before and will be grooving on it all day. I need to up my indoor plant name game. I’ve only named one, a philodendron, who I call Rapunzel… for obvious reasons.
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I have a Rapunzel in my house too! Let the tendrils grow 🙂
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This post made me want to run out and buy some plants, Pam. What a lovely story. I think Jason’s going to add a lot of color to her life in addition to green. 🙂 ❤ ❤
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I think you are right, Diana. And I think I’m also going to go out and buy another potted green hope. 💚
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That sounds lovely.
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You pack a lot of story and feeling in a few words Pam. Unfortunately, I feel like Jill, maybe I need a woman to save me in an elevator and bring some hope and excitement back to my life.
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Or, go visit a florist shop and see if any human flowers are wandering around needing some green hope in their lives. 💚
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Beautiful story! Greenery is such an important thing and I love how you worked this into the story. New life. New hope. Absolutely lovely!
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Thank you Linda! I do name the plants in my house and I find that I talk to them every morning and they respond! Plants are beautiful living beings. Call me weird but I do think they bring us hope. 💚🙃
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They certainly do bring us hope. I love my plants as well. I have a lemon tree and an orange tree that I must bring into the house when the winter temps drop down to freezing. Each year I have to make room for them. The orange tree is getting quite big and gets a lot of oranges. It is beautiful to see it blooming in the house!!!
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🍋 Lucky you!! 🍊
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Thanks for a story full of hope and emotion, Pam. I can always count on you to brighten my Friday morning. Hugs to you.
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Well if I brought some sunshine and green hope to your life today and over the weekend, that makes me a very happy person. Hugs to you, Amy!
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Awe! Touching! From despair to hope and I will water my plants with gratefulness today.
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Water is love to plants. That, and talking to them soothingly while pouring on the love. ❤
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Such a beautiful and well-written piece, Pam. I think they will move in together at some point. 🙂
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The more plants Jason brings to Jill’s abode, the greater likelihood that he will move in. 🙂
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Great story, but dangit, I now have that pesky song stuck in my head.
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At least it’s a CUTE, pesky song. 🙂 In case you forgot over the weekend — BE BOP A LULA!!
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Stop it!
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Super story, Pamela. I always liked the song too.
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BE Bop is an oldie that the young’uns’ should know – thus, I’m rocking it in my posts. 🙂 Thanks, John.
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You are the public service headquarters. 😁
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Haha – exactly!
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What a patient guy, with a great plan.
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“Those who wait and love will get rewarded eventually.” I think I just made that up but it works. 😄
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Absolutely beautiful.. Things may often progress slowly.. But there is always Hope that the Be Bop a Lula returns in our lives..
Loved the Greenery ,,,, And yes they do help clear oxygenate and cleanse ..
Sending love.. And loved the Song, brought back a few Beep Bops of my own 🙂 ❤
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Your response is exactly what I had hoped, Sue. And several people mentioned that of course plants grow slowly oh so slowly and patiently. And that’s what we need to do as well. Here’s to oxygenating our souls!
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Hope thrives even after a tragedy–you did this beautifully, Pam!
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You hit it on the mark. I like to show in my stories that we all live with some kind of tragedy but the best thing we can do is to still find hope and love. 💚🌱💚
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This is so sweet, Pam. You always have such wonderful short stories. I love reading them.
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Thank you thank you thank you Anneli. As you know, I love writing them! 💚
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And aren’t we the lucky beneficiaries of your writing!
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xoxo
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Good song choice
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Thank you! An oldie but goodie that many people seem to have forgotten. Now I hope lots are singing Be Bop in their heads for days. 😉
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If I remember correctly, you have a real-life plant named Be Bob a Lula. I love how you insert a bit of your personal life in your creative writing. It always keeps me on my toes! 🙂
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You are amazing Donna and you remember correctly! I better be on my toes now! But yes Wayback when early in our relationship my guy brought me a bebop a Lula to our first home. 💚 The rest of the story is fiction but yes I believe many writers intersperse the personal with the make-believe.
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A delightful flash fiction, Pam. Be Bop a Lula—just what she needed. This short work packs a great message and insight into ‘character’.
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Thanks so much Lisa. I’ve just been teaching my students about the importance of character development and how we should embody our characters. I think I brought in a lot of Chlorophyll in this one. 😃🪴
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Lively Be Bop a Lula, song and plant, Pam! What a guy, brings plants and life back to Jill! Wonderful story! 🙂
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I admit, Miriam, Jason is one of my favorites now from my stories. I think he may have to come back sometime. 🤔But only if he arrives with a plant or two, of course. 😍🌱
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It’s good to have a green thumb guy around, Pam. I got mine from my dad. Good luck with Jason’s new move. 😉
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A wonderful story. Plants can be a lifesaver in many ways. I love that he named them. So special.
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The more we spend time with our plants the more we realize they have individual personalities. And it’s so much fun to name them! Thanks much for your comment, Darlene. 🙏🌱💚
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I immediately heard that song in my head as soon as I saw the first words. Now I feel old… lol.
Wonderful story with such great analogies. Everyone needs a “Be Bop a Lula” in their life, especially when they feel there will never be “Hope” again. 🎍🌳🌱🍁
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Until I wrote the story I hadn’t been singing or thinking of this song for a long time. But the older I get the more I like this song! May we keep bebop be lula-ing along, Kim. 🎵😄💚
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I think Jason and Jill’s relationship will continue to grow skyward…as their roots continue to run deep. Green Hope indeed!
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You are a master of the metaphors! Love the idea of their roots growing deeper as their love reaches skyward. Thank you so much. 💚🌱
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Thanks for putting that song into my head for the next seven weeks, Pam! Hahaha
I think Jill needs a little color in her life. Pretty sure I’ve been in her shoes before. 😉
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If I may remind you – bebop be lula she’s my baby. Ha ha. I’m singing it for the next seven weeks also. Yes isn’t it nice that now we have so much color in our lives, Terrie?
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Like the green plants, I’m guessing Jason will be injecting more chlorophyll into Jill’s life. Yes?
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That’s a sexy way of saying it, Marian! 😄😍💚🌱
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Good thing Jason is quiet and patient. I’m thinking that might just be the magic Jill needs.
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Yes, and reading your comment I realized that Jason is just like the plants in our homes. Very quiet and patient! 😃🌱🌱
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Just as they should be. 🙂
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Good work 💼
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Many thanks. 💚
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Holaaaaaa, I love ferns of love!!! 🤗
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Perhaps that should’ve been my title! Ferns of love. Perfect, thank you! 🌱💚
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Good story. Nature nurtures!
BTW: I’ve never heard that song before.
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What a sweet story! And what a flash from the past! I knew all the words to Be Bop a Lula. A fun song. Nancy must be too young for it. It came out in 1956, although there were many later versions from the Everly Brothers to Paul McCartney.
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I never knew Paul McCartney covered that song! He’s my favorite musician. I think Be Bop a Lula is a classic, and for those who know music (no matter the age) they will know this song. Wellll, our grandkids do because we sing it to them. 🙂
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That song is certainly an oldie but goodie. I never would’ve known it if my guy, seven years older than me, hadn’t introduced it to me years ago. It sure does have a be bopping beat🎵 !
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NATURE NURTURES – now that’s a great chant to sing all day long. Thanks, Nancy.
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Such a lovely story. So much emotion in so few words. ❤
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What a great compliment, Carol. Trying my best at flash fiction with emotion and sincerity. XOXO
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Nature is beautiful
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Best natural beauty in the world! Mother Nature. 🌱
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Lovely
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Thank you Bernadette! 🌱
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-giggles- The Green Offensive. 😀 😀
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There you go. Great dating device! 🪴
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lmao – indeed. 😉
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Wonderful, Pam–just like you!
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Love you Pat. And I bet you surround yourself with green plants. xo
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What a sweet story! Love it!
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So glad you like the Be BOP story. Green is the new sweet! 🙂 xo
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🥰
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This is wonderful! Well done, Pam
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Yay, so glad you enjoy my “green is love, plants teach us patience and hope” story, Jennie. 🙂
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You’re welcome, Pam. Yes, plants teach us so much.
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I just love your stories. This one is so uplifting and full of hope,
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To green plants and spice and lots of love in your household, Gerlinde. I know you have all of the above. xoxo
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this was so well done – with the green font too – and the other colors woven in – 🙂
clever
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Thank you for noticing! Creativity goes in all kinds of directions. 🙂 ❤
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😊☀️☀️☀️
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I loved this story Pam ❤
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To the power of plants, healing us in many ways. Thanks, Debby.
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🙂
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Good 👍 work. Nicely done
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Good
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It’s wonderful🌻🥰
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Thanks for the fine text and pictures. Now we know more and we will have more plants in our rooms.
Wishing you all the best
The Fab Four of Cley
🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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A “planted” house is a happy house. 🙂
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Ahh, this is so lovely, Pam! Hope is the message and plants are the light (I have a soft spot for houseplants). Well done. x
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Hi Jennifer! Yes, plants make a difference in our lives. 💚
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love your creative story with healing green and the music is perfect for your ” ‘Be Bop a Lula.’” plant Pam!
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Uh oh, you got me singing the song again, Cindy. 🙂 xo
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